Reality Show Flare
by Angie Arcangioli
891 words for Chuck Wendig's prompt based on a photo check out his Terribleminds blog to see it
by Angie Arcangioli
891 words for Chuck Wendig's prompt based on a photo check out his Terribleminds blog to see it
Crafton laughed.
“I’m gonna kill every one of you fuckers. All you done since we got on this stupid
island is laugh at me. You think I’m the
loser. Well you’re wrong. You're the losers.”
No one budged.
They were mesmerized by the flame of the torch that shot over them and
the agonising cameraman whose abdomen was charred black by its flame. Crafton had planned it well.
The guy was sick,
really sick. Audrey thought. She hadn’t laughed at him, even when he’d
tried to hit on her. She thought he was
just another geek. But he was sick, like
shut-him-up and melt-the-key sick.
They didn’t deserve this, they’d been chosen by
the producers, she’d driven eight hours and stood in line another four for the audition. She sang, danced, and waited
for the verdict like the others. Thousands
had been interviewed. How could they
have picked this creep? She tried not to
look at him but he was engulfed by power. Clark Kent turned Superman. What had been his trick?
“You are the one that started it.” He swung the torch towards Jake, the cutest
guy Audrey had ever met in her life.
Jake’s hair caught fire.
“No.”
He tried to jerk away but the duct tape that imprisoned his arms and legs to the lawn chair immobilized him. They were all taped to something, mostly lawn chairs in a circle. Crafton said it was a game he’d invented. Thus to humour him, and stop the ranting temper tantrum he’d thrown, Mr. Sandman the director, had abided. Until it was Sandman’s turn.
He tried to jerk away but the duct tape that imprisoned his arms and legs to the lawn chair immobilized him. They were all taped to something, mostly lawn chairs in a circle. Crafton said it was a game he’d invented. Thus to humour him, and stop the ranting temper tantrum he’d thrown, Mr. Sandman the director, had abided. Until it was Sandman’s turn.
Audrey cringed, closed her eyes when she smelt
the bittersweet scent of burned flesh. She
did not want to look at Jake, now snivelling.
He’d reminded her of Brad Pitt and she wanted to keep the image. He’d be marred for life. If they ever escaped, his acting career was limited to scarface.
The humid tropical air steamed around
them. Vapour rising from the wet grass
blurred into a terrible orange aura around Crafton. It was the color of power, ambition. That is what her yoga teacher had said. It came from the third chakra.
“You, Mr. Bigshot,” the geek with the torch
yelled at Mr. Sandman, “you planned to eliminate me from the beginning. Well now it’s your turn.” He pointed the flare at Mr. Sandman who
screamed. Crafton giggled, it was a sick sound.
Audrey closed her eyes, willed herself to the
safe spot she went to while meditating.
The swing hanging from the sycamore’s branch rocked. Her mother sang a
lulluby. She thought she was too old to
love it but it soothed her. She drifted
into the memory and let go. She was
rocking, singing. The rhythm of the
swing sped then slowed, a metronome on her piano. Mamma sang, she rocked.
“And you bitch, what are you singing about?”
Audrey opened here eyes.
“It was a song my mother sang to me when I was
unhappy.”
Calm engulfed her, she felt right, everything felt
right. She would die, killed by a freak
with a flare on the set of a reality show she was starring in with nine others
on a tropical beach far from Mamma and the swing in the sycamore tree.
She closed her eyes and sang,” Rock-a-bye baby
on the tree top, when the wind blows the cradle will rock.”
“Shut up.”
She heard it from far away. She
was three, maybe four and the Labrador licked her toes every time the swing
shot forward.
“When the bough breaks, the cradle will fall.”
“I said shut up, bitch.”
She opened her eyes and saw a dark figure
standing behind Crafton. A green light
pulsed through the orange glow. It was
the other cameraman, he was filming everything.
What a dork. Audrey thought, she
sang but did not close her eyes.
“And down will come
baby, cradle and all.”
The
cameraman slammed Crafton in the head with a boom mic. The flare fell in the middle of the grouped
lawn chairs. He filmed Crafton crash to
the ground, unconscious. He filmed the
flame scorch two girls. They screamed as
their sarongs turned to ash, glued to their legs. He filmed while they wailed in pain, zoomed
on their tears.
“Baby is drowsing, cozy and fair,
mother sits
near, in her rocking chair,
forward and back,”
Audrey was out of
reach of the flame. She watched Mr.
Sandman roll his chair with his arms that were free but seared from the molten
duct tape.
“Do something, you idiot,” Sandman shrieked.
The cameraman zoomed in on Crafton, who opened
his eyes.
Audrey closed hers and sang, “The
cradle she swings
and though baby sleeps, he hears what she sings...”
“Do what?
Isn’t this planned?”
Audrey laughed, sang, “From the high
rooftops, down to the sea...”
“No you idiot,” Sandman squawked.
Audrey opened her
eyes again. The flame burned, boiled the
grass. Steam rose.
“Kill him, or he’ll
kill us.”
“But this is great,
we’ll be on Oprah.” He zoomed on Audrey.
“No one's as dear,
as baby to me
, wee little fingers, eyes wide and bright,
now sound asleep, until
morning light.”
Audrey stopped, rejuvenated. Stillness filled her mind when the LED on the
bulky camera went red and slammed through Crafton's skull.
wow!!
ReplyDeleteMy goodness!! This is awesome!! I would never never near such reality show (when there is such stupid cameramen)!!
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ReplyDeleteWow, maybe I'll think differently next time I watch Survivor!! Crazy story, love it. Stupid cameraman! Good job. Flows well, easy to read.
Hi Lindsay, glad it flows well and is easy to read
ReplyDeleteI think you caught the great irony of reality television. Fun story and I thought the use of the lullaby was particularly effective. Nice contrast.
ReplyDeleteThanks Lesann. The lullaby came as an afterthought
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